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       Cold weather is good. It is fun to play in the snow if it is cold enough.
Cold weather is also good because after playing in the snow you get to go inside and drink hot cocoa.
One time in Alabama my friends and me had a big snow ball fight.
Now you know that cold weather is good.

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Cold wether is good.Becaues it is fun to play in the snow if it is cold enuf.
Cold wether is also fun becuas after playing in the snow you gite to go in side and drink hot coco.
In alibama my frindes and me hade a big snow ball fit.
Now you now that cold wether is fun.

     I am so happy that thankes giving is next Thursday. I am going to have my dad's and mom's family over.  Also, I am going to have my cousin over. Finally when thankgiving day is done, we are going to eat gumbo.

Three Things I am Thankful for

I am thankful for my dog. My dog is so fun and  cute.

I am thankful for my dog when she playes with me. I am thankful for my dog when she barks at strangers.One time I was playing on my street and she barked at my neighbor when they came by. That is why I am thankful for my dog.

I am thankful for my school. My school is a cool school.
I am thankful for my school because my teachers are cool.
I am thankful for my school because sometimes when I need to help they help me.
One time I was doing math and I did not know the answer and they helped me.That is why I am thankful for my school.

I am thankful for my friends. My friends are fun.
They are nice and they are cool. One time they were playing at a party and they  invited me to the party. That is why I am thankful for my friends. 

Three thinges I am thank foll for.

I am thank foll for my dog.Because my dog is so fun and quit.
 I am thank foll for my dog win she playes with me.I am thank foll for my dog win she barkes at strangeres.One time I was playing on my street and she braced at my naber win thay came by.

I am thank foll for my school.Because my school is a cool school.
 I am thank foll for my school becaus my techecheres are cool.
Iam thank foll for my school becaus  some timeswen I nede to help thay help me.
One time I was doing  math and I did not no the anser thay helped me.

I am thank foll for my friendes.Becaus thay are fun.
And thay are nich.And thay are cool. One time thay wer playing at a party and thay thay in vited meto the party.