Christmas Cook Bunny

             One day a Cook bunny 
wint to git a christmas tree. And the sine sed: closed no tree stores open.Coke bunny sed that that is crazy and marched of. He was sad of cores but he did not see wiy thar was no trees left.Then he had a idea and it was to eat more cooke. But that did not help. so he had a nether idea and it was to go to bunny cookey christmas tone. In zobel flyer so he wint . Andon the way zobel flyer got tired and fell a slep and the nexed day he was in christmas toon and thaer was coco rander and christmas gumy trees so he asked santa for some of the tree and he sed yes.So he at the botam of six trees and wint to his hous and gave five tree to the pepel in toon and cept one for him.

Draft Two

       Cold weather is good. It is fun to play in the snow if it is cold enough.
Cold weather is also good because after playing in the snow you get to go inside and drink hot cocoa.
One time in Alabama my friends and me had a big snow ball fight.
Now you know that cold weather is good.

draft1

Cold wether is good.Becaues it is fun to play in the snow if it is cold enuf.
Cold wether is also fun becuas after playing in the snow you gite to go in side and drink hot coco.
In alibama my frindes and me hade a big snow ball fit.
Now you now that cold wether is fun.

     I am so happy that thankes giving is next Thursday. I am going to have my dad's and mom's family over.  Also, I am going to have my cousin over. Finally when thankgiving day is done, we are going to eat gumbo.

Three Things I am Thankful for

I am thankful for my dog. My dog is so fun and  cute.

I am thankful for my dog when she playes with me. I am thankful for my dog when she barks at strangers.One time I was playing on my street and she barked at my neighbor when they came by. That is why I am thankful for my dog.

I am thankful for my school. My school is a cool school.
I am thankful for my school because my teachers are cool.
I am thankful for my school because sometimes when I need to help they help me.
One time I was doing math and I did not know the answer and they helped me.That is why I am thankful for my school.

I am thankful for my friends. My friends are fun.
They are nice and they are cool. One time they were playing at a party and they  invited me to the party. That is why I am thankful for my friends. 

Three thinges I am thank foll for.

I am thank foll for my dog.Because my dog is so fun and quit.
 I am thank foll for my dog win she playes with me.I am thank foll for my dog win she barkes at strangeres.One time I was playing on my street and she braced at my naber win thay came by.

I am thank foll for my school.Because my school is a cool school.
 I am thank foll for my school becaus my techecheres are cool.
Iam thank foll for my school becaus  some timeswen I nede to help thay help me.
One time I was doing  math and I did not no the anser thay helped me.

I am thank foll for my friendes.Becaus thay are fun.
And thay are nich.And thay are cool. One time thay wer playing at a party and thay thay in vited meto the party.

Endanjerd animales draft 1

Are animal's endangered.
Yes. We need to save them or Thay will .
I think we sued save all Endangered animals.
Because sum animals Wald diy because thay Wald  have  no food .

If you do not save all animals ether animals can take aver.
A endangered animal is a axelateles .
And panda or even piniver nes plantes.

A lot of animalies diyed from the oyel spill.
lik fish and birdes and oteresand sqid and jely fish and star fish.
Thay are all inpor tint in sum wayes.

big writing

                                                                 Holiday: Halloween
by:Emma and Beru
monkey vampire: I’m a vampire.
snake: AHHHHH!
monkey vampire: Don’t wory i will just eat you.
snake: No you wo...
monkey vampire: Yum good meal.
snake: I am a ghost!!!!!!!!!!!
monkey vampire: AHHHHHHHHHH!
snake: BOO
monkey vampire: Zombies why oh why.
snake: Zombies where?

Big Writing October,5 2011

Dear Ms. Amy
      
       Hello, my name is Emma and I am 8 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa  Rosa Beach, FL.

       We are working on a project with the essential  question,"What is the ultimate living thing?"I chose the  dolphins.
    
       As part of the way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my  project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved and thinges that I have done well. Here is a link to my project:

Thank you,
Emma
TESLA

draft 2

   I think dolphins are the ultimate aquatic animal that lives in the ocean.  Some are pink. Thay can also do awesome  tricks .Thay make calls to other dolphins.The reason I like them is because thay protect people from  sharks .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :  ]

I think dalfines  are the alitmint aqatik  aminale that lives in the oshin  . Because  some  are pink . Thay do alsom  trikes .Thay make calinges to ether dalfines.The resin I like them because thay pertekt pepoel from  sharkes .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :  ]

airplane
airplanes  are inpoutint  becasu  pepole  cant  driv a car cas it taces to long .It can tack 18 houres to get to whar you are going in a car.But it depines whar you are going like if you are going to alebama to flarda you can tack a car.Like this summer I talk a airplan to git to seatel becaues I live in flarda.Airplanes are in partint becaus thay are faster than cares so it tackes leas time.

My first writing

This is just a test.